http://ladymercury-10.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] clocketpatch 2010-09-15 03:32 am (UTC)

I liked it! I'd like to see more of the first section--it sort of gets lost in the whole Martha moving into the TARDIS bit. Also, "Bligh me" should be "Blimey." But Martha is fab, and so it was fun to read your story. :)
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