Date: 2008-03-04 03:36 am (UTC)
ext_22618: (:D by bewarethespork (me))
From: [identity profile] bewarethespork.livejournal.com
Oh, wow. You know I'm rapidly falling in love with this story, right?

I spotted one mistake:

Derbies is everywhere, and what is serving as the floor is slanted and treacherous.

Did you mean "debris"?

Otherwise, this is so, so fantastic.
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