Nice! I think the more you write her, the better you are at captureing Donna's face, which makes sense. I like this chapter a lot! I especially like how it is developing. You have me wondering if Donna is going to cause more trouble, if she'll try and safe the Doctor or if there will simply be consequences to the Doctor being hurt.
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Date: 2009-09-17 03:20 pm (UTC)I like this chapter a lot! I especially like how it is developing. You have me wondering if Donna is going to cause more trouble, if she'll try and safe the Doctor or if there will simply be consequences to the Doctor being hurt.
Keep it coming please! :D