(Start re-wording things. Use more words to say the same thing - not too many more, because it'll sound hackneyed and terrible, but a few more. Lengthen your intro and conclusion a little - they're usually the easiest ones to work on. Do you need a proofreader or something? If it's in the next hour or so, I could have a look over it for you.)
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Date: 2008-04-04 04:14 am (UTC)(Start re-wording things. Use more words to say the same thing - not too many more, because it'll sound hackneyed and terrible, but a few more. Lengthen your intro and conclusion a little - they're usually the easiest ones to work on. Do you need a proofreader or something? If it's in the next hour or so, I could have a look over it for you.)