I like it! I do see though that you could use a betaer. Might I offer my services. :)
But I really think it is a great start. I think you did a very good job with the personification particularly for Ace and the Doctor. I can also tell you are an anthropology buff from how you chose to begin. ;) That's not a bad thing at all.
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Date: 2008-08-05 03:14 am (UTC)But I really think it is a great start. I think you did a very good job with the personification particularly for Ace and the Doctor. I can also tell you are an anthropology buff from how you chose to begin. ;) That's not a bad thing at all.
I hope you do continue you.