Very strong start. I really liked the atmospherics of Rory in the graveyard, then Kate and Brian - and the characterisation and voice you have for Brian are especially great. And then Amy in the past - very much liked the observation about how the cars and clothes, while familiar, look different in "real life" - very true. And those angels, everywhere... Can't wait for the next parts. :)
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Date: 2012-10-30 11:27 pm (UTC)