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Date:
2012-11-09 10:10 am (UTC)
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Oooh!
And some Beta-y/Brit-picking comments:
Near the front of the shop a bit of space had been cleared and three round table set out for people to sit and read.
three round tables were set out
It was a different era, but Amy had travelled enough to know that something didn't change no matter how far back in time you went.
some things not something
Another door a little ways further down the wall.
Brit-pick: way not ways
"I asked him you know," Brian said, picking a dishrag up off the facet,
Brit-pick: dishcloth; tap not faucet (though you've written facet, I'm assuming that was meant to be faucet!)
It's simple math.
Brit-pick: maths not math over here
Brian set the damp towel down on the counter.
It was a cloth before, so for the sake of consistency it ought to be again!
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Date: 2012-11-09 10:10 am (UTC)And some Beta-y/Brit-picking comments:
Near the front of the shop a bit of space had been cleared and three round table set out for people to sit and read.
three round tables were set out
It was a different era, but Amy had travelled enough to know that something didn't change no matter how far back in time you went.
some things not something
Another door a little ways further down the wall.
Brit-pick: way not ways
"I asked him you know," Brian said, picking a dishrag up off the facet,
Brit-pick: dishcloth; tap not faucet (though you've written facet, I'm assuming that was meant to be faucet!)
It's simple math.
Brit-pick: maths not math over here
Brian set the damp towel down on the counter.
It was a cloth before, so for the sake of consistency it ought to be again!