Date: 2012-12-16 02:04 pm (UTC)
ext_3965: (Brig + Kate LS - Like Father Like Daught)
From: [identity profile] persiflage-1.livejournal.com
Poor Amy...



Beta-ish comments:

revealing a silver of pale, hairy chest.

sliver, not silver

I'm grateful to her for here sacrifice.

her not here

Would it effect Melody through the link?

affect not effect

He left to buy milk right after the Chesterton's arrived

No apostrophe!

But with the Chesterton's showing up.

No apostrophe!
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